End of summer poem for the Poetry Dance challenge. This is just for fun, mind you. I just logged on and haven't even thought of anything yet, so give me a moment.....
Ok....
Summer's sun kissed cheeks
Fading to a milky glow
Moon shadows dance on trees
And silently waits for snow
Scented candles fill my breath
The lonely beaches mourn
For little feet to scatter 'round
For flowers to be born
Beautiful colors floating down
To waiting cherub hands
Summer's over it is true
But autumn has it's plans
8 comments:
haven't thought of anything? Well, then you need to just let that sporadic mood hit you more often! I loved this. It was divine reading.
Plus, I might mention, I love that you put your picture in your journal!!!
Rebecca
I agree with Rebecca ...not only is the poem lovely and full of the imagery I adore...seeing you there makes it come alive....I love this poem having spent countless summers daily at the beach with my four children...I am glad you joined the Poetry Dance
Courtenay
This is very whimsical. Very sing-song and not over the top at the same time. I enjoyed it. Kudos!
I especially like the bit about the beaches and the last line is superb.
SINS
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I can't believe this was a "spur of the moment poem" GREAT JOB!! It is very descriptive in a relaxing way.. just right!!! I haven't written a poem since high school either.
Hi! Very pretty oh so pretty!~ You express yourself wonderfully! I agree with you about Rebecca's talent too, she is a great one to admire!
Ok, I am off!
Renee' @ http://journals.aol.com/acyrlicstains/publish/entries/1441
Hi, so nice to meet you. I really enjoyed this poem. I just found you over at Poetry Dance. ;) C. http://journals.aol.com/gdireneoe/thedailies
I really LIKE THIS !!!
Thanks for stopping by my journal. I really like the people here that I have met.
Stace
Hi Michelle,
just wants to say......
C o n g r a t u l a t i o n s!
Gem :-)
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